Chapter Four *YOUTUBE!*

NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!ONE!ELEVENSHIFT+1

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

I can't seem to access my site to host the update at the moment, so no update today.

RAGE!!!


Use Spametheweb.

The good news is everything is looking cooler.

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

The good news is everything is looking cooler.

:<

Well, it's finally here!

http://sirtopeia.com/users/blizzardblade/chapters/Ep%204.swf

Comments & Critiques? There are some things I need to work on towards the end of the preview that I probably know about, but tell me anyways, please.

Jishen blinks too much and his idle looks real shaky up close.

Yeah, something I've already told Blaze to fix.

I lol'd at the expression on the archer's face.
I like what you did with what little i've done on that sheet. Bravo. T'was pretty cool.
Also, I don't know if anyone's noticed, but the scene selection thing is all scenes from the previous chapter.

Well,
I assume you already have the sprite probelms under control...But the dialogue needs alot of work IMO>

Deuxelim wrote:

Well,
I assume you already have the sprite probelms under control...But the dialogue needs alot of work IMO>

Agreed.

Do you still have the scritp I sent you?

And sorry to be a prick, but is it possible you could state that instead of them casting him out for too much killing, instead to say that they blamed Snow for the destruction of the village?

Aiden wrote:

I lol'd at the expression on the archer's face.
I like what you did with what little i've done on that sheet. Bravo. T'was pretty cool.
Also, I don't know if anyone's noticed, but the scene selection thing is all scenes from the previous chapter.

Yeah, I'm still too lazy to change the pictures. The buttons still go to the right scenes, though.

Deuxelim wrote:

Well,
I assume you already have the sprite probelms under control...But the dialogue needs alot of work IMO>

Such as?

Well...IMO

Korah: Something doesn't seem right here..
should be:
Korah:..Something about this place gives me the chills...

and what Snow said.

Deuxelim wrote:

Well...IMO

Korah: Something doesn't seem right here..
should be:
Korah:..Something about this place gives me the chills...

and what Snow said.

Eww, that sounds way worse.

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Deuxelim wrote:

Well...IMO

Korah: Something doesn't seem right here..
should be:
Korah:..Something about this place gives me the chills...

and what Snow said.

Eww, that sounds way worse.

It does.

typo in Snow's memory:
exat.

Luna wrote:

typo in Snow's memory:
exat.

Cleod beat ya to it.

So, What's coming up in this department?

Chaosvii7 wrote:

Jishen blinks too much and his idle looks real shaky up close.

Yeah Korah told me about that..

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Yeah, something I've already told Blaze to fix.

I need help i tried a few other things..even giving him a new pose and well it looks bad...
I wanna keep the same pose..but i cant fix the damn idle! >,<

Woot, minor update. Remember you can just click scene III to get to this point.

http://sirtopeia.com/users/blizzardblade/chapters/Ep%204.swf

I'm thinking of just uploading just this part to Youtube this week and calling it "Chapter IV part one." And then finishing the rest of it and uploading it as part II in youtube while uploading both parts as one in Newgrounds. The reason for this is that it's been a very long time since a chapter came out, so it's about time I show everyone something. I could also link this video on my newgrounds account. What do you guys think?

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Woot, minor update. Remember you can just click scene III to get to this point.

http://sirtopeia.com/users/blizzardblade/chapters/Ep%204.swf

I'm thinking of just uploading just this part to Youtube this week and calling it "Chapter IV part one." And then finishing the rest of it and uploading it as part II in youtube while uploading both parts as one in Newgrounds. The reason for this is that it's been a very long time since a chapter came out, so it's about time I show everyone something. I could also link this video on my newgrounds account. What do you guys think?

Seems fair , as long as it's complete to the fullest

I think it is, what about everyone else?

I liked the music. It was cool.

I've got some more jungle-themed music I could show you if you want.

Naw, I don't think I need anymore. And thanks. I've learned to make the music match the mood correctly.

It's pretty good so far! =D
Only thing that erks me is the dialogue, even though I think someone's mentioned it before ^^;

such as:

"Oh no, it's those bandits!" -kinda corny ^^;

Well, what do you want him to say?

"YES ITS THOSE BANDITS!"