Chapter Four *YOUTUBE!*

Snow Taradien wrote:

I liked it so far, my only problem being there the Teardrop doesn't fit in as well with the sprite as it does the Mugshot.

Other than that. I'm happy.

Yea, I kind of thought so too.

Aiden wrote:

I think the scene where he kills all the guards could look a little better.
It actually looks kinda funny, when they lie in a big cluster like that in a pool of mspaint blood.

...and sweet, you used my slash. Looks better than I thought it would.

Can you be more specific?

Deuxelim wrote:

I think we could emphaisize the scene of Snow's past a little bit better, maybe a bit more close-ups, and really emphaisize when the guards Kill rachel like its life changing or something.
and make Snow kill the guards as if he was actually fighting.

I can do that. Actually, that gives me tons of ideas. I'll get right to it.

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Snow Taradien wrote:

I liked it so far, my only problem being there the Teardrop doesn't fit in as well with the sprite as it does the Mugshot.

Other than that. I'm happy.

Yea, I kind of thought so too.

Aiden wrote:

I think the scene where he kills all the guards could look a little better.
It actually looks kinda funny, when they lie in a big cluster like that in a pool of mspaint blood.

...and sweet, you used my slash. Looks better than I thought it would.

Can you be more specific?

Deuxelim wrote:

I think we could emphaisize the scene of Snow's past a little bit better, maybe a bit more close-ups, and really emphaisize when the guards Kill rachel like its life changing or something.
and make Snow kill the guards as if he was actually fighting.

I can do that. Actually, that gives me tons of ideas. I'll get right to it.

I believe what aiden is refering to is that the death of the knights is a bit meh.

Probably implying the same thing that Deux actually said, that the guards should actually FIGHT snow.

However, it's really up to you, since a fight of that scale could take a LOT of work.

Well, I have an idea to show that the knights fought snow, without actually showing it. You'll see what I mean, and I'm pretty sure you will all like it.

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Well, I have an idea to show that the knights fought snow, without actually showing it. You'll see what I mean, and I'm pretty sure you will all like it.

I'm slightly confused, but it sounds cool nevertheless.

Trust me. It's more dramatic, more BA, and less work!

*waits*

Fixed! Also, the scene selection works now, but I haven't updated the pictures yet. So, to see all the updates, select scene II.

http://sirtopeia.com/users/blizzardblade/chapters/Ep%204.swf

*EDIT*

Also, when you click on the link, refresh the page so it can record the update.

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Fixed! Also, the scene selection works now, but I haven't updated the pictures yet. So, to see all the updates, select scene II.

http://sirtopeia.com/users/blizzardblade/chapters/Ep%204.swf

I get an Error message

Lol, sorry. It should work now, though. And make sure you refresh!

Wow. Snow is very badass indeed. Not that we needed to see that to know though :p

Much better, but you may want to check your grammar.

and maybe everybody in the village dies instead.

Yes, now there's actual action.

It just looked funny before; I laughed a little.
Now it's good.

Deuxelim wrote:

Much better, but you may want to check your grammar.

and maybe everybody in the village dies instead.

Most of the others in the village actually should end up dying.

Originally Snow stays in the village for a short while, helping the wounded and burying the dead.

He later leaves for revenge.

Okay, for some reason, my computer is broken again...

WELL. FIX IT. D:<

I didn't see any action.....

Good news. I worked on it some more today. Bad news. I got very little done. I'll get right to it on Sunday, though. That is, if I'm not school shopping...

Things are going well. I've been watching tons of movies and cartoons while I was gone, so I've come up with many ideas to make this flash SO much better. I redid the Snow vs Knights scene and it looks 9000 times better, and the way I'm introducing the bandits looks way better than my original idea. I'll try to post something tomorrow sometime.

You're already introducing the bandits?

Oh, now I can't wait to see it!

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Things are going well. I've been watching tons of movies and cartoons while I was gone, so I've come up with many ideas to make this flash SO much better. I redid the Snow vs Knights scene and it looks 9000 times better, and the way I'm introducing the bandits looks way better than my original idea. I'll try to post something tomorrow sometime.

I can't get on tommorow...D:

Can't wait to see it.

I finished the update, but I'm unable to post it right now. I still have a few things I gotta work on, and I'll post it tomorrow. But trust me, everything looks WAY better than before, including the beginning scenes. Take my word for it.

I can see you're excited.

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

I can see you're excited.

I am....when you post it.

I can't seem to access my site to host the update at the moment, so no update today.