Chapter Four *YOUTUBE!*

Awesome, can't wait to see the final result.

This is pretty much the last update for Chapter Four till tomorrow's release, so give me any last second critique before it's too late! Be online tomorrow so you can help vote on it!

http://sirtopeia.com/users/blizzardblade/chapters/Ep%204.swf

lolfail

i forgot i gotta do the credits

Awesome. Just two things. One, the sigh. Not that big of a problem, but still kinda awkward.

Next, no credits. I just realized that.

Either that or it takes an awful long time for them to start.

Other than that, everything is fine.

You missed my post on that fail.

You should really, really fix the parts with the missing backgrounds in some places.
Like when the ground just ends. You should extend it a little.
Also, when Snow does his Blizzard Beam, it cuts off at the beginning.
Even when the Bandits were on-screen, you could see where it ended. You should expand the ground tiles and the Blizzard Beam effects out of the frame.
Then again, I guess the users on NG won't get the added perk of fullscreen viewing.

Awesome. Damn man, this is getting better with each episode. Of course, they're all good. But I'm almost sure it'll be frontpage'd. In fact, if the other one was, this one HAS to be.

Aiden wrote:

You should really, really fix the parts with the missing backgrounds in some places.
Like when the ground just ends. You should extend it a little.
Also, when Snow does his Blizzard Beam, it cuts off at the beginning.
Even when the Bandits were on-screen, you could see where it ended. You should expand the ground tiles and the Blizzard Beam effects out of the frame.
Then again, I guess the users on NG won't get the added perk of fullscreen viewing.

Yea, nothing is really missing when the flash is at 550x400.

Luna wrote:

Awesome. Damn man, this is getting better with each episode. Of course, they're all good. But I'm almost sure it'll be frontpage'd. In fact, if the other one was, this one HAS to be.

I kinda doubt it just cause the last one began with a fight scene.

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Luna wrote:

Awesome. Damn man, this is getting better with each episode. Of course, they're all good. But I'm almost sure it'll be frontpage'd. In fact, if the other one was, this one HAS to be.

I kinda doubt it just cause the last one began with a fight scene.

Well, not all frontpaged stuff starts out with BOOM SHAKA LAKA. If they give it a chance, I'm certain they'll like it.
Also, I spotted a little something. Right before Snow remembers what happened to Rachel, his drawing moves back a little. Not all that important, but I doubt it was on purpose.

Luna wrote:

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Luna wrote:

Awesome. Damn man, this is getting better with each episode. Of course, they're all good. But I'm almost sure it'll be frontpage'd. In fact, if the other one was, this one HAS to be.

I kinda doubt it just cause the last one began with a fight scene.

Well, not all frontpaged stuff starts out with BOOM SHAKA LAKA. If they give it a chance, I'm certain they'll like it.
Also, I spotted a little something. Right before Snow remembers what happened to Rachel, his drawing moves back a little. Not all that important, but I doubt it was on purpose.

Most newgrounders will lose their attention with this flash in 2 minutes, and the action stuff don't happen till many minutes in.

Oh yeah, that's a tough thing to fix just because the way I made it.

Also, forgive me for being picky but...
That drawing of Snow doesn't look so great. The lines are pretty messy.

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Luna wrote:

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Luna wrote:

Awesome. Damn man, this is getting better with each episode. Of course, they're all good. But I'm almost sure it'll be frontpage'd. In fact, if the other one was, this one HAS to be.

I kinda doubt it just cause the last one began with a fight scene.

Well, not all frontpaged stuff starts out with BOOM SHAKA LAKA. If they give it a chance, I'm certain they'll like it.
Also, I spotted a little something. Right before Snow remembers what happened to Rachel, his drawing moves back a little. Not all that important, but I doubt it was on purpose.

Most newgrounders will lose their attention with this flash in 2 minutes, and the action stuff don't happen till many minutes in.

Oh yeah, that's a tough thing to fix just because the way I made it.

Just add "WAIT FOR THE FIGHTSCENE, IT'S WORTH IT" on the author's notes or whatever. and D: no fix then?

Luna wrote:

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Luna wrote:

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Luna wrote:

Awesome. Damn man, this is getting better with each episode. Of course, they're all good. But I'm almost sure it'll be frontpage'd. In fact, if the other one was, this one HAS to be.

I kinda doubt it just cause the last one began with a fight scene.

Well, not all frontpaged stuff starts out with BOOM SHAKA LAKA. If they give it a chance, I'm certain they'll like it.
Also, I spotted a little something. Right before Snow remembers what happened to Rachel, his drawing moves back a little. Not all that important, but I doubt it was on purpose.

Most newgrounders will lose their attention with this flash in 2 minutes, and the action stuff don't happen till many minutes in.

Oh yeah, that's a tough thing to fix just because the way I made it.

Just add "WAIT FOR THE FIGHTSCENE, IT'S WORTH IT" on the author's notes or whatever. and D: no fix then?

Lol, I was thinking of writing that too.

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Luna wrote:

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Luna wrote:

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Luna wrote:

Awesome. Damn man, this is getting better with each episode. Of course, they're all good. But I'm almost sure it'll be frontpage'd. In fact, if the other one was, this one HAS to be.

I kinda doubt it just cause the last one began with a fight scene.

Well, not all frontpaged stuff starts out with BOOM SHAKA LAKA. If they give it a chance, I'm certain they'll like it.
Also, I spotted a little something. Right before Snow remembers what happened to Rachel, his drawing moves back a little. Not all that important, but I doubt it was on purpose.

Most newgrounders will lose their attention with this flash in 2 minutes, and the action stuff don't happen till many minutes in.

Oh yeah, that's a tough thing to fix just because the way I made it.

Just add "WAIT FOR THE FIGHTSCENE, IT'S WORTH IT" on the author's notes or whatever. and D: no fix then?

Lol, I was thinking of writing that too.

:333

So, are you gonna update the site at all when you upload it there?

Enjoy guys! I hope you the wait was worth it. Oh, btw, you're going to see some unexpected changes in there...

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/517163

You should also create a news post for it and I also rated an 5.

I like what you did there.

Awesome.

If I could still log in to newgrounds i'd 5 it but, I can't.

Snow Taradien wrote:

I like what you did there.

Awesome.

If I could still log in to newgrounds i'd 5 it but, I can't.

You could still vote. But your voting power won't be much.

You still didn't remove the sigh, NF <_<

*Sigh*

lawl
EDIT: also, you misspelled portrait in the credits.

Thanks, Deux.

I figured I'd only get sixth place. I only lost by a few points. I just wish I had that 4.1 back.

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Thanks, Deux.

I figured I'd only get sixth place. I only lost by a few points. I just wish I had that 4.1 back.

\Well if it's good enough to get the daily 6th place,

think of how good it will be later down the road.