Chapter Four *YOUTUBE!*

Variety to swords will be done eventually.

I can't continue animating this until I get more of those dragon and bandit leader sprites. If someone can PLEASE get right on top of that, it would be great.

Awesome. I liked that thing Korah did at the end, it's like
Snow: USE THE FORCE, KORAH!
Korah: *force push*
But seriously, keep it up.

What do you need right now to be able to continue?

Dragons and Jinshen.

That's right, I've adding voice acting! We haven't done any direct dialogue yet, but instead we've just done some simple voices in the background. I suggest you watch the whole chapter again to see what I'm getting at.

http://sirtopeia.com/users/blizzardblade/chapters/Ep%204.swf

*watches*

Ewww...
I really did a bad job on that sigh...

On another note, Hai, Ze, and Toa VA Clips are used for sword slashes, so try to fit that in if you want.

I'm gonna add more No, yes, sigh, and stuff sometime soon.

Well. IMO...That was awful. New idea, no speech. Just grunts and such. Only speech should be for techniques like "BLIZZARD BEAM" and stuff. Either that or actually make the person say what's in the subtitle box.

Or, you could, just have no voices at all.

Chaosvii7 wrote:

Or, you could, just have no voices at all.

NF was all "MAKE UP YOUR MIND" as he read that. AMIRITE, KORAH?

YES!

Hey, I never said I wanted voice acting. Ever.

Actually the voice overs were pretty well done!

except...for that sigh...

Deuxelim wrote:

Actually the voice overs were pretty well done!

except...for that sigh...

IT'S GROSS! I GET IT!

lawl.

Well, some of it was kinda well-implemented.
Others, particularly for Snow....
Yeah, Snow's Voiceacting made me lol.
He didn't sound like he cared as much for Rachel as the text would lead you to believe...
EDIT: Also, you could put the flash onto Deviantart as a submission, but I can't say I blame you if you don't at this point.

Ok, i'm gonna be very honest with you. Some places it worked, and some places it just didn't. Korah's voice is alright, but when you used it for the battle near the end, it sounded pretty terrible. Put more feeling into it! you overused the "umm" a little too much as well. Heroes never say "Um", they always know what they're going to say, and what they say inspires you so much that you feel like selling your house and donating the money to a worthy cause. Snow's voice was fine, you just need somebody that can make it sound real.

Snow Taradien wrote:

Deuxelim wrote:

Actually the voice overs were pretty well done!

except...for that sigh...

IT'S GROSS! I GET IT!

Sorry, Snow..

Omg the voice acting makes it so much better X3
I loved it when Korah said 'Bring it on' near the end XD SO COOL! X3

Okay there is something I want to point out.

When Rachel gets struck by the soldiers blade, her eyes should be opened all the way, to emphasize a point of impact.

Deuxelim wrote:

Okay there is something I want to point out.

When Rachel gets struck by the soldiers blade, her eyes should be opened all the way, to emphasize a point of impact.

I never even thought of that, awesome idea.

Agreed on this.

Also, noticed the dialogue changes, it's much better now.
Thanks, Korah.

I still see the typo I pointed out though...

Which one? I fixed the typos, but for some reason some of them got erased.

I've worked on it a lot today. I implemented some new things in there, but I'm not sure if it turned out as well as I wanted it to. You'll see what I mean tomorrow.