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An update! It's not much, really. I just added some better timing on the music, some dialogue fixes, added some dialogue, and made the dialogue a bit more enjoyable to read by moving the camera a bit. It ends at "nightfall." I'm going to need some sprites of a cave and a little campfire, do you guys know of any?

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I just finished watching it.
And I realized... I want moar, but I need a cave for Moar...

So I will find or sprite one IMMEDIATELY!

HUZZAH AND AWAY!
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*Waits for Cave Sprites*

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I liked it... is waaaayyyy better than before.
Also, I love the touch that korah could touch both blades and got frozen...
I told you to make him do so on the last episode... but you didn't want to Razz .

The action itself is kind of limited, but it's not a bad animation if you focus on the story.

Also, I know it's a little detail, but you forgot to clean 2 pixeles from snow:
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Yeah, there are a few places of white space from Snow other than that pose.

*Scurries off to fix*

Btw, I really need some cave sprites!

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The ones I'll give you next... will be much smaller....
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I'm animating again today, guys. I don't think there will be an update tonight, but I just wanted to let you guys know that this episode will be a somewhat flashback episode, so more dialogue, but it's to build story.

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Ohh, Tasty!

Can't wait!
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Also, I'm going to need sprites of Rahcel, Korah's Master, and the King ASAP.

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I just sent you Rachel...
As for the other two...
Can you use Nac's Nergal?

And for his master....

I can try making one, just tell me the poses you need and what it should look like.
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Another update! Lots of dialogue, I just hope it's not too boring. If it is, please tell me on how to fix it. I also might change the music when Snow begans to talk about the corrupts. All of this backstory should sound familar to those who read the TLOK Dex.

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Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
Another update! Lots of dialogue, I just hope it's not too boring. If it is, please tell me on how to fix it. I also might change the music when Snow begans to talk about the corrupts. All of this backstory should sound familar to those who read the TLOK Dex.

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Oh cool...
but I should really start reading this TLOK Dex you are talking about... I've no idea who this "snow" fellow is...[/jk]
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Deux Ex Jinzo[Nac] wrote:
Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
Another update! Lots of dialogue, I just hope it's not too boring. If it is, please tell me on how to fix it. I also might change the music when Snow begans to talk about the corrupts. All of this backstory should sound familar to those who read the TLOK Dex.

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Oh cool...
but I should really start reading this TLOK Dex you are talking about... I've no idea who this "snow" fellow is...[/jk]
Can I have an opinion of the flash plz?

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Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
Can I have an opinion of the flash plz?

I was planning to edit that post once I finished seeing it Neutral ....

well, The action itself is kind of lame, but is better than anything I can do, so I won't complain.
(I guess is because you need more practice, that's all)

I've got to say the last dialog before going to cave has really been improved.

Finally, I don't like the effect of changing between sprites and hand-drawn art as you did in the last part.
I suggest you to use both, the sprite and drawing (making the drawing more transparent... with less than 50 alpha). That way, you'd not change the format....

P.S I still don't know who this "snow" guy is
Crying or Very sad ...jk....


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How can you not know who Snow is?
That's like saying you don't know who the president/prime minister of your own country is.

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Ok, I really enjoyed it, aside a few typos.

My problem was this though, there is a part during the bet, where it freezes up for a moment, Whether this is Lag, or this is intentiaonal I'm not sure.
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Snow's sitting sprite looks weird...
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Angell Miroden wrote:
Snow's sitting sprite looks weird...
Indeed.

But I didn't make it so...


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Deux Ex Jinzo[Nac] wrote:
Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
Can I have an opinion of the flash plz?

I was planning to edit that post once I finished seeing it Neutral ....

well, The action itself is kind of lame, but is better than anything I can do, so I won't complain.
(I guess is because you need more practice, that's all)

I've got to say the last dialog before going to cave has really been improved.

Finally, I don't like the effect of changing between sprites and hand-drawn art as you did in the last part.
I suggest you to use both, the sprite and drawing (making the drawing more transparent... with less than 50 alpha). That way, you'd not change the format....

P.S I still don't know who this "snow" guy is
Crying or Very sad ...jk....
I have an idea on how to make the drawing blend in a little bit better.
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Ok, I really enjoyed it, aside a few typos.

My problem was this though, there is a part during the bet, where it freezes up for a moment, Whether this is Lag, or this is intentiaonal I'm not sure.
I have typos?

What freezes up for a moment?
Angell Miroden wrote:
Snow's sitting sprite looks weird...
Then make a better one.

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Ok, I really enjoyed it, aside a few typos.

My problem was this though, there is a part during the bet, where it freezes up for a moment, Whether this is Lag, or this is intentiaonal I'm not sure.
I have typos?
Yes, Two.

What freezes up for a moment?
It's during the Bet Scene, When Snow kicks Korah, then tells him to get up and fight, it sort of freezes up for a moment, it gets all laggy, and the music stops.

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Where are my tpos?

Hm, are you watching the flash in full screen? Flash lags when it's in full screen.

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Where are my tpos?

Hm, are you watching the flash in full screen? Flash lags when it's in full screen.
Nevermind about the lag, it was my fault.


As for the typos
Scene One -During the Pre-Fight Chat:
Snow says:
Swordsmans
Change to: Swordsmen

Scene One -During the Pre-Fight Chat:
Snow says:
Abide to my teachings
Change to: Abide BY my teachings

Scene Two -During the fight:
Snow says:
weather I'd attack or not
Change to: whether I'd attack or not

Scene Four -The Angelis explanation
Snow says: Angleis
Change to:
Angelis
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Snow Taradien wrote:
Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
Where are my tpos?

Hm, are you watching the flash in full screen? Flash lags when it's in full screen.
Nevermind about the lag, it was my fault.


As for the typos
Scene One -During the Pre-Fight Chat:
Snow says:
Swordsmans
Change to: Swordsmen

Scene One -During the Pre-Fight Chat:
Snow says:
Abide to my teachings
Change to: Abide BY my teachings

Scene Two -During the fight:
Snow says:
weather I'd attack or not
Change to: whether I'd attack or not

Scene Four -The Angelis explanation
Snow says: Angleis
Change to:
Angelis

I figured one of them would involve a made-up word...
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*Fixed*

Thanks for pointing that out.

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Tell me if this is a better transition for when Snow's Portriat appears. Also fixed the typos.

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