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X-ela Hyoutetsu
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|  Subject: Chapter Five  Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:45 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Fri Dec 25, 2009 2:09 am | |
| - Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
- Sorry guys, but with hardrive issues, I can't upload it.
 Excuses only drive oneself into shame, little grasshopper. | |
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Luciole2831
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Fri Dec 25, 2009 9:53 am | |
| o so you already got it done or is this a preview | |
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Snow Taradien
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Fri Dec 25, 2009 10:35 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:33 pm | |
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Luciole2831
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Fri Dec 25, 2009 3:14 pm | |
| o well i guess nothing can do about it but wait for to get fixed. until then so what now  | |
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X-ela Hyoutetsu
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Fri Dec 25, 2009 10:21 pm | |
| Here's the preview, but I have worse news. I can't open the actual .fla file itself. That means I can't edit what I have....
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Fri Dec 25, 2009 10:41 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Fri Dec 25, 2009 10:52 pm | |
| Whoa amazing , *INSPIRED TO SPRITE* | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Fri Dec 25, 2009 11:43 pm | |
| Nac opinion:
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You did good changes between sprites and hand-drawn images! Finally!
This time it looks good. Swift but well-defined.
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The plot? Meh, it doesn't make sense that the bandith just look how Snow kicks their dragons' asses.
Also, wasn't snow tired from the last battle?
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The action?
Looks good... a little bit too exaggerated for me.
Throwing a dragon against a building? What's Snow, a terrorist?
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Adding voices... it makes the whole thing a LOT more interesting...
But I don't like Snow's voice actor.
I don't know if it's because it doesn't fit Snow, or because you give him stupid lines. ("YOU CAN NOT BEAT ME", "WHOOSHOOO", "MMM")...
Maybe both.
5º
Even when you add voice acting, you should also add subtitles (or make them optional).
It makes it a lot easier for people with crappy English (A.K.A me) to understand.
This far Nac likes it. | |
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Snow Taradien
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Sat Dec 26, 2009 2:36 pm | |
| - NeoAstralCardbox wrote:
- Nac opinion:
4º
Adding voices... it makes the whole thing a LOT more interesting...
But I don't like Snow's voice actor.
I don't know if it's because it doesn't fit Snow, or because you give him stupid lines. ("YOU CAN NOT BEAT ME", "WHOOSHOOO", "MMM")...
This far Nac likes it. To be quite Frank, the current voice I'm doing for him is quite a bit different from my original intended voice. But still, its lol gereratingly bad. Therefore WIN. Anyway, I like it... Its too bad that you can't open the FLA for a while... | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Sat Dec 26, 2009 4:28 pm | |
| There is only one probelm I have this:
Snow's pupils pop outta his eyes. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Sun Dec 27, 2009 7:59 pm | |
| nice action looks improved from when you showed korah and snow training but the drawings could improve a lil bit to make it more real other then that overall i give it a 3.9/5  | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Mon Dec 28, 2009 12:46 am | |
| It really good, though the drawn pics are under detailed, if there's only a few them, you should put more effort into them. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Fri Jan 01, 2010 2:11 am | |
| I think there should be some kinda hole left from where the dragon gets put through the building.
Also, when the bandits just stand there, it looks kinda dumb. Make them move around some more; at least jumping or preparing to attack.
Isn't the temple supposed to be important to Snow? | |
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Snow Taradien
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:16 am | |
| - Aiden wrote:
- Isn't the temple supposed to be important to Snow?
Yes. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Sun Jan 17, 2010 7:25 pm | |
| - Aiden wrote:
- I think there should be some kinda hole left from where the dragon gets put through the building.
Also, when the bandits just stand there, it looks kinda dumb. Make them move around some more; at least jumping or preparing to attack.
Isn't the temple supposed to be important to Snow? The bandits are supposed to just sit back and enjoy the show. They hadn't realized that Snow was so BA. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Fri Jul 09, 2010 9:21 pm | |
| I agree that him throwing the dragon into a place that he loves is confusing o_o
And i think the bandits just sit there because they thought the dragons would've killed him | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Fri Aug 13, 2010 2:45 am | |
| Yes, I have been working on this. | |
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Snow Taradien
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Fri Aug 13, 2010 8:07 am | |
| - Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
- Yes, I have been working on this.
And we can't wait! | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Fri Aug 13, 2010 11:59 am | |
| Woah i have not posted here in a while.
And i was thinking about that whole dragon crashing into building thing.I thought since that place was like a sacred shrine were angelis would go and nobody else knew about that building but when bandits came and started attacking the shrine was no longer a safe and sacred area so it would be better if the place were destroyed by one of the race who made it then being tainted by an outsider. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Mon Nov 29, 2010 11:45 pm | |
| - Luciole2831 wrote:
- Woah i have not posted here in a while.
And i was thinking about that whole dragon crashing into building thing.I thought since that place was like a sacred shrine were angelis would go and nobody else knew about that building but when bandits came and started attacking the shrine was no longer a safe and sacred area so it would be better if the place were destroyed by one of the race who made it then being tainted by an outsider. I agree  | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Five Thu Dec 02, 2010 9:25 am | |
| Yea and since it had been discovered, it would be best to help keep the other if any surviving angelis would try to go inside they wouldn't be attacked by bandits. So if it's destroyed then they would know it had been discovered. | |
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