Snow's Poetry Thread

This is my Poetry Stuff

~ Radical Dreamers ~

Those people look at me
They wonder who I am
A cold glare piercing me
They don't know who I am

I look back they turn away
I wonder why they all still say
"What is it that keeps him here...?"
"What reason does he bother for?"

To them I'm nothing at all
Nothing more than a...
Radical Dreamer...
...Forsaken Child

But as the world will soon learn
My dreams and actions tell a tale
My hopes aren't as empty,
As they seem to be

These dreams I have
Held in my heart
Keeping me out of the dark
Shattered hopes fall all away

To them I'm nothing at all
Nothing more than a...
Radical Dreamer...
...Forsaken Child

They think they know who I am
But they really don't know a thing
They don't know me now
And never will

Now I believe
All I have Left
Is the beating in my chest
As the cold winds blow my way

To them I'm nothing at all
Nothing more than a...
Radical Dreamer...
...Forsaken Child

I look out to the darkened skies
As the moonlight hits my eyes
I here men calling out
"This way... This way..."

Apparently I've done some wrong
And they've cast me here to rot
Locked behind this man-made steel
I feel like I'm all alone

To them I'm nothing at all
Nothing more than a...
Radical Dreamer...
...Forsaken Child

To them I'm nothing at all
Nothing more than a...
Radical Dreamer...
...Forsaken Child

HI SNOW!!

Quite chilling. I like it. Although I am surprised that there aren't any references to pickles...

...Just kidding! ^_^

Once I'm done mine, you'll be having some competition in the world of poetics!

Ah, quite good.

I await your works.