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Snow Taradien
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|  Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!*  Fri Feb 13, 2009 1:07 pm | |
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X-ela Hyoutetsu
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Fri Feb 13, 2009 3:31 pm | |
| - Angell Miroden wrote:
- ok, in the blizzard beam thing: same noises repeating, no music = boring, annoying.
When Snow asks Korah "Are you serious?" Korah responds with "I'm afraid not." = Makes no sense, either change the question to "Are you joking?" or the answer to "I'm afraid so." There's always music playing, I don't know what you're talking about. And I fixed that second part already, just haven't updated the fixed verison yet. | |
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Luna
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Fri Feb 13, 2009 4:15 pm | |
| o rly? I hear no music while they're firin their lazas | |
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X-ela Hyoutetsu
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Fri Feb 13, 2009 4:48 pm | |
| - Angell Miroden wrote:
- o rly? I hear no music while they're firin their lazas
Are you watching full screen? | |
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Luna
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Sat Feb 14, 2009 12:19 am | |
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X-ela Hyoutetsu
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Sun Feb 15, 2009 3:50 pm | |
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Snow Taradien
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Sun Feb 15, 2009 6:12 pm | |
| - Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
- Angell Miroden wrote:
- Yeah. btw, what do you think about this?
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1981163/ I'm not sure if I can use this anywhere. Eh... good point. Since it's another version of the song that was remixed to make Iced Out... it works. But as of now I don't think so... Perhaps a fight scene? | |
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X-ela Hyoutetsu
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Sun Feb 15, 2009 6:35 pm | |
| - Snow Taradien wrote:
- Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
- Angell Miroden wrote:
- Yeah. btw, what do you think about this?
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1981163/ I'm not sure if I can use this anywhere. Eh... good point.
Since it's another version of the song that was remixed to make Iced Out... it works.
But as of now I don't think so...
Perhaps a fight scene? It doesn't sound like a fight scene to me. | |
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Snow Taradien
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Sun Feb 15, 2009 7:21 pm | |
| - Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
- Snow Taradien wrote:
- Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
- Angell Miroden wrote:
- Yeah. btw, what do you think about this?
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1981163/ I'm not sure if I can use this anywhere. Eh... good point.
Since it's another version of the song that was remixed to make Iced Out... it works.
But as of now I don't think so...
Perhaps a fight scene? It doesn't sound like a fight scene to me. Hmmm... Good Point... It's more of a character theme anyway, hence the title Ice's Cruel Mistress. I thought of the song at the same time I created a Female Villain who controls both Wind and Ice. | |
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Archlord Adramelech
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Mon Feb 16, 2009 2:55 pm | |
| Consider this?  | |
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X-ela Hyoutetsu
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Mon Feb 16, 2009 3:00 pm | |
| - Deuxelim wrote:
- Consider this?
Snow's face looks weird, and Korah's hair isn't spikey. His pallete is awful too. | |
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Archlord Adramelech
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Mon Feb 16, 2009 3:02 pm | |
| - Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
- Deuxelim wrote:
- Consider this?
Snow's face looks weird, and Korah's hair isn't spikey. His pallete is awful too. Fine, i'll fix it. I wanted your onion. | |
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X-ela Hyoutetsu
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Mon Feb 16, 2009 3:03 pm | |
| - Deuxelim wrote:
- Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
- Deuxelim wrote:
- Consider this?
Snow's face looks weird, and Korah's hair isn't spikey. His pallete is awful too. Fine, i'll fix it.
I wanted your onion. I have no onions. | |
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Archlord Adramelech
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Mon Feb 16, 2009 3:04 pm | |
| - Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
- Deuxelim wrote:
- Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
- Deuxelim wrote:
- Consider this?
Snow's face looks weird, and Korah's hair isn't spikey. His pallete is awful too. Fine, i'll fix it.
I wanted your onion. I have no onions. Oh yeah, then why does your breathe want to make me cry? | |
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X-ela Hyoutetsu
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Mon Feb 16, 2009 3:06 pm | |
| - Deuxelim wrote:
- Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
- Deuxelim wrote:
- Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
- Deuxelim wrote:
- Consider this?
Snow's face looks weird, and Korah's hair isn't spikey. His pallete is awful too. Fine, i'll fix it.
I wanted your onion. I have no onions. Oh yeah, then why does your breathe want to make me cry? There were no toothbrushes back then? | |
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Archlord Adramelech
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Mon Feb 16, 2009 3:07 pm | |
| - Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
- Deuxelim wrote:
- Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
- Deuxelim wrote:
- Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
- Deuxelim wrote:
- Consider this?
Snow's face looks weird, and Korah's hair isn't spikey. His pallete is awful too. Fine, i'll fix it.
I wanted your onion. I have no onions. Oh yeah, then why does your breathe want to make me cry? There were no toothbrushes back then? This is why Neodammerai's didn't have teeth. and were an advanced race. MASTER RACE! MASTER RACE! | |
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Luna
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Mon Feb 16, 2009 3:08 pm | |
| o.O ...
Kids, don't do drugs. | |
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Archlord Adramelech
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Mon Feb 16, 2009 3:13 pm | |
| - Angell Miroden wrote:
- o.O ...
Kids, don't do drugs. Setting an Example, eh Angell? | |
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Luna
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Mon Feb 16, 2009 3:15 pm | |
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X-ela Hyoutetsu
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Mon Feb 16, 2009 10:53 pm | |
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Archlord Adramelech
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Tue Feb 17, 2009 9:32 am | |
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Eriko Hemming
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Tue Feb 17, 2009 6:34 pm | |
| - Deuxelim wrote:
- Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
- Here's an update. More Ice training stuffs.
http://www.box.net/shared/5vz5ae036g Yay! Awesome I'll watch it now Nice , I like the small hints of more character/humor you put into them | |
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Snow Taradien
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Tue Feb 17, 2009 9:08 pm | |
| Good, and humourous... but Palm Trees? | |
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X-ela Hyoutetsu
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Tue Feb 17, 2009 9:22 pm | |
| - Snow Taradien wrote:
- Good, and humourous... but Palm Trees?
I couldn't find any other trees to work with. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Three *On Youtube!* Wed Feb 25, 2009 4:41 pm | |
| - Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
- Here's an update. More Ice training stuffs.
http://www.box.net/shared/5vz5ae036g I really think that the line "No, it's because you didn't use enough ice attacks" is pretty lame... sorry  I believe that a better phrase would be "Because you became predictable. You should have used more ice attacks" ... Also, I think is pretty cheap that korah can AUTOMATICALLY mimic snow without even trying it for a couple of times... before he says "let me try this", he should practice the attack 2 or 3 times. ... Last but not least, when Snow uses the ice attack and korah stops it... Korah shouldn't stay on a single spot... he should be moving backwards (very slowly). Then, when snow says "I'm going to finish it" (and throws a bigger beam), Korah should be pushed backwards very, very fast, until he is no longer able to keep standing (hence, he falls and gets frozen). | |
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