Chapter Three *On Youtube!*

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Deuxelim wrote:

also Snwo said there were some typo's he was right.

Deuxelim wrote:

also
for the Dragon dialogue.

Korah:...Dragons..

Snow: Yes, Wyverns to be exact, and they will eat whatever they can find, and did I mention they can breathe fire and love the taste of human flesh?

Korah:...err...no..

I can do that.

And about McKrakken. I want him to appear at the end of the episode, but I kind of think that the claw and his name is a bit corny. Perhaps if he had a different animal part (along with a new name) would make him better. Any suggestions? Should I just leave him be?

And I'll be releasing this Chapter by tomorrow or Wednesday.

Awww.Crap I made a typo.

I just think we can go a bit more into detail about the dangers of the forest and such.

something like;

Snow: be glad you have me for a navigator, otherwise you would probaly get lost forver in the sea of trees, and die a slow and painfull death of starvation or dehrydration.


Korah:....What?

Snow: Don't worry the forest is only full of Bandits that will slit your throat for all your precious belongings,
and off course the dragons.

What do you think about McKrakken?

Yes, the name Mckracken is slightly cheesy... but I don't mind the idea of a GIANT CLAW.

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

What do you think about McKrakken?

The name is meh.
I like the claw.
But it could use some work.

How about something like

Kaiser McKracken, Captain of of his majesty's Nergal 110th divison, of the imperial army,
also for 4:

Snow and Korah need walk sprites.
and Korah needs a sheath.

I know i would get tired of carrying a sword that long, for the long.

Korah will get a sheath later.

And I've change McKrakken's name to Brine Aegir.

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Korah will get a sheath later.

And I've change McKrakken's name to Brine Aegir.

I like that name.

Alright, this is my final update before I upload this to Newgrounds tomorrow. I've added the ending which will hopefully make the audience want to see more of this series.

http://www.box.net/shared/5vz5ae036g

My only problem right now is that I'm not sure what PA to use for Brine. Here's what I have:



The top one on the left is Mello, the one on the right is my edit. It's an extremely easy edit and too obvious, but it looks a lot like Brine.
The bottom one on the left is Kurama, the real base head for Brine, and the one on the far right is my edit. This one makes it less obvious and more original, however I don't think it looks too good. Opinions? And you guys can go ahead and try to fix it if you want, or make a new one.
I like the scarred one.

FFFFFF TOO GOOD. Like SMBZ tier with the second sparring session, no exaduration. NF you're getting too good at this!

I meesed with your PA's a bit Brine is ugly now,

Here you go.


and so far, so good.

Melo's edit is the only one good this far.... the rest suck hard time.
(including yours, deux )

If you wish, you can try to improve the one deux did... if not, just keep using Melo.

Ps: try to change the hue of the eyes... they are terror pink.

Deux Ex Jinzo[Nac] wrote:

Melo's edit is the only one good this far.... the rest suck hard time.
(including yours, deux )

INORITE!!!!!

Deuxelim wrote:

Deux Ex Jinzo[Nac] wrote:

Melo's edit is the only one good this far.... the rest suck hard time.
(including yours, deux )

INORITE!!!!!

YOU KNOW NOTHING!

...

I noticed your sprite was very good... it just had a crappy shading...
here you have how I would have shaded it:



https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img11/5127/nacsuperawesomeskillsto.png

Deux Ex Jinzo[Nac] wrote:

Deuxelim wrote:

Deux Ex Jinzo[Nac] wrote:

Melo's edit is the only one good this far.... the rest suck hard time.
(including yours, deux )

INORITE!!!!!

YOU KNOW NOTHING!

...

I noticed your sprite was very good... it just had a crappy shading...
here you have how I would have shaded it:



https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img11/5127/nacsuperawesomeskillsto.png

Yes, I like it.

Deuxelim wrote:

Deux Ex Jinzo[Nac] wrote:

Deuxelim wrote:

Deux Ex Jinzo[Nac] wrote:

Melo's edit is the only one good this far.... the rest suck hard time.
(including yours, deux )

INORITE!!!!!

YOU KNOW NOTHING!

...

I noticed your sprite was very good... it just had a crappy shading...
here you have how I would have shaded it:



https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img11/5127/nacsuperawesomeskillsto.png

Yes, I like it.

Next time, try to make a deeper study of lights... the way you shaded him was pretty...

unatural... and it made no sence havinf in mind the way his hair was shaded.

It could be improved, but I'm too lazy.

Deux Ex Jinzo[Nac] wrote:

Deuxelim wrote:

Deux Ex Jinzo[Nac] wrote:

Deuxelim wrote:

Deux Ex Jinzo[Nac] wrote:

Melo's edit is the only one good this far.... the rest suck hard time.
(including yours, deux )

INORITE!!!!!

YOU KNOW NOTHING!

...

I noticed your sprite was very good... it just had a crappy shading...
here you have how I would have shaded it:



https://2img.net/r/ihimizer/img11/5127/nacsuperawesomeskillsto.png

Yes, I like it.

Next time, try to make a deeper study of lights... the way you shaded him was pretty...

unatural... and it made no sence havinf in mind the way his hair was shaded.

It could be improved, but I'm too lazy.

XD
I didn't shade him, a just C'N'P'd 2 halves together.

Deuxelim wrote:

XD
I didn't shade him, a just C'N'P'd 2 halves together.

Lolazy

Deux Ex Jinzo[Nac] wrote:

Deuxelim wrote:

XD
I didn't shade him, a just C'N'P'd 2 halves together.

Lolazy

lolpotcallingthekettleblack.

and what our....game...

Deuxelim wrote:

Deux Ex Jinzo[Nac] wrote:

Deuxelim wrote:

XD
I didn't shade him, a just C'N'P'd 2 halves together.

Lolazy

lolpotcallingthekettleblack.

and what our....game...

This seems kind of out of topic...

Remember I lost my computer to a virus attack a while ago? ...
Well, until I can convince my father to lend me some money to buy me Macromedia flash for the new computer, there will be no game.

Deux Ex Jinzo[Nac] wrote:

Deuxelim wrote:

Deux Ex Jinzo[Nac] wrote:

Deuxelim wrote:

XD
I didn't shade him, a just C'N'P'd 2 halves together.

Lolazy

lolpotcallingthekettleblack.

and what our....game...

This seems kind of out of topic...

Remember I lost my computer to a virus attack a while ago? ...
Well, until I can convince my father to lend me some money to buy me Macromedia flash for the new computer, there will be no game.

LEGASP
sorry man, I forgot...

Deuxelim wrote:

LEGASP
sorry man, I forgot...

...

I never expected you to remember something as random as that...

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Alright, this is my final update before I upload this to Newgrounds tomorrow. I've added the ending which will hopefully make the audience want to see more of this series.

http://www.box.net/shared/5vz5ae036g

My only problem right now is that I'm not sure what PA to use for Brine. Here's what I have:



The top one on the left is Mello, the one on the right is my edit. It's an extremely easy edit and too obvious, but it looks a lot like Brine.
The bottom one on the left is Kurama, the real base head for Brine, and the one on the far right is my edit. This one makes it less obvious and more original, however I don't think it looks too good. Opinions? And you guys can go ahead and try to fix it if you want, or make a new one.
I like the scarred one.

I see no Kurama.

Deux Ex Jinzo[Nac] wrote:

Deuxelim wrote:

LEGASP
sorry man, I forgot...

...

I never expected you to remember something as random as that...

You didn't inform me of that....

....................
my bad..

Yes! It's finally on Newgrounds! Keep your fingers crossed!

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/490576

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Yes! It's finally on Newgrounds! Keep your fingers crossed!

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/490576

looks gewd.

Based on the comments, i'd say it's a hit so far.

*Waits for it to load*
EDIT:

Holy shit.
I was not expecting half of what I saw.
That was great! Epic as hell!

Although the framerate really suffered when Snow and Korah were freezing the trees, and the ground tiles were easy to distinguish from one another.
Still... Holy shit.