The Legend of Ultimaxion.

Soemthing I wrote in my spare time gais,
I dunno if this could be used but just an adaption of Snow's stories.
Hope you like it.

Ages ago...

Beyond the boundaries of time and space...dwelled the realm of Eternity...dwelled the realm of the Gods.
and in this realm, the Gods planned forth their greatest project..The construction of our world...Terra.

Through their power they created our Terra through the elements...

Earth...
Fire...
Wind...
Water...
Lightning...
Ice...
Darkness...
Light...

Through these elements, the gods created beautiful and lush plains, tall and majestic mountians, great blue oceans, the gentle winds, and the day and night.
They added another element, that of Aether of which to make our spirits and of which would make our bodies...
The gods stepped back to observe their creation to give space to grow and develop...
and so it did..

New races came from the old...there was joy in the world, but also sadness...but nay, Terra was at peace.

But for how long...?

Soon the 2 most powerful and oldest of the gods were throught with Conflict..They were: Koltes, God of Light , and Vectos, God of Darkness...

The gods argued and debated as to what fate should befall their new world...Their arguements became more and more harsh waxed strong with anger and hatred...

They had no knowledge of what was brewing...

A dark cloud, spawned from the battle of the the 2 gods grew more and more powerful as their anger grew more tense...till it reached it's peak. This evil cloud of hatred, descended to Terra, where it took form...from the eight elements that the gods used to create Terra...

Eight vile serpentine heads arose from from this malicous cloud, each wielding a different element...
Each head being born from hatred and anger only knew one thing.....

Destruction....

Each evil head rose into the air and relaesed a horrifying roar...
This roar... caused the sky to blacken and release no more light...
This roar...caused the earth to crack and tremble...
This roar...caused the mountains to erupt into flames...
This roar...caused the land to grow cold and frigid...
This roar...caused the waters to grow unsettled and violent...
This roar..caused the thunder to rage in skys like never before...
This roar..caused the gentle wind to evolve into a mighty tempest...

This roar...sought the end of Terra.

The beings who lived on Terra's land were terrified some ran and hid, some fought...but were no match for the demon's mighty power...

It seemed the end was nigh....

Until....

8 swordsmen with the purest of hearts..... all from different lands...sought to slay the beast...even if they were to perish trying...

When they finally conflicted the beast they fought a valiant battle...but could not pierce the beast's magic hide.
Then..

The Gods stopped their meanlingless bickering to notice the state of their creation...but more importantly..the chivalrous struggle of the 8 warriors...

Quickly using their celestial powers, the God's granted the warriors blades a divine gift of that to pierce the monster's flesh...With this gift each of the warrior's submerged their blades into the skull of one of Ultimaxion's serpentine heads...

The monster..fatally wounded let out a dying roar as each of it's heads faded back into the elements it was forged from...

The warriors's blades...soaked in the blood of a different head..gained the elemental power from which they had plunged their blades into...and shortly after.. having used all their strength...

Died...

The Gods in divine shame and guilt, restored Terra..and closed the gates of Eternity..never glancing on their creation..

Ever again..

So...whaddya guys think?

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Snow Taradien wrote:

I like.

Great!

anything else?