TLOK Ch. 5 loading illustration

This is the pic I have been working on for TLOK.
I have yet to incorporate the Wyverns, but I did get a helpful book that will teach me how to draw dragons (scoff at that as you will, we'll see who has the last laugh), but right now I need your opinions on the other characters... the only ones I didn't have a problem drawing were my own.

I really do enjoy where this is going. I'm assuming that the dragons are going to go behind Korah and Snow, yes?

What I don't like are the facial structures. All of them look very strange in shape (except the standard bandit). I don't like how Snow and Jishen's hair cover their eye like emo characters. Korah's mouth is in the wrong spot, too. Jishen has actually five blades, one around each finger. That's about all I can find atm.

Looks good so far


Crap as a critic but snows right arm looks weird to me ( left from our point of view) too short or the bend isn't visable enough

Whoa man. I don't see what you guys mean about the faces...
Eh, I like it as is.

The 2 refs I got of Snow both showed his eye covered up by his hair and really baggy sleeves.
One was Mittie's pic, the other was Snow's avatar.
As for Jishen, I can fix that, and for the faces, I could fix them too. Too triangular, I assume?
I did good with the sword hilts, yes?

Baggy sleeves are good, cause that's how it is. Here's another refrence for Snow's face if you need it:

https://2img.net/h/i135.photobucket.com/albums/q151/bluecoyote12/snowp.jpg

Although his eye is covered up there too....

Yes, I think the faces are too triangluar. It makes their faces seem too weird, to me. And Snow's hilt looks fine to me. Korah's is kinda close, but part of the hilt goes over Korah's hand slightly. In one of my pictures it has how the hilt should look like.

Pretty good so far.

And the hair thing.

It's just common for the hair to go that way.

Anyway, I like where this is going.

Holy crap thats better than what i made!
But yeah what Korah said and maybe the smile, unless you can make him look like more mad rather than happy?
Oh that and the chin but yeah
i like it! =D

Hmm.
Well, i've updated that picture.
Here.
I put in the wyvern, and tried to address all the little concerns you guys came up with.

Except for the wyvern, the rest look quite good.

Would you mind if I try to give it a shot?

Not at all.

Now that I think about it, that is one ass-ugly Wyvern.

How do I fix it?

Try making it more like Deuxs'?