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PostSubject: Re: NF, Eriko, Daichi, and Deux   NF, Eriko, Daichi, and Deux - Page 2 Icon_minitimeFri Jan 30, 2009 10:17 am

Snow Taradien wrote:
Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
That's way to cliche. Sounds too much like Moses and Eldeon.
Yay bible?

Uh...
Hmm...
I'll think o' sumthin dunt you wurry.
Fine this women was poor and found Eriko in a tree.
that work?
I has a good story.
just wait plz.
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Deus Ex Angelo wrote:
Snow Taradien wrote:
Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
That's way to cliche. Sounds too much like Moses and Eldeon.
Yay bible?

Uh...
Hmm...
I'll think o' sumthin dunt you wurry.
Fine this women was poor and found Eriko in a tree.
that work?
I has a good story.
just wait plz.
K?
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PostSubject: Re: NF, Eriko, Daichi, and Deux   NF, Eriko, Daichi, and Deux - Page 2 Icon_minitimeFri Jan 30, 2009 10:28 am

Snow Taradien wrote:
Deus Ex Angelo wrote:
Snow Taradien wrote:
Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
That's way to cliche. Sounds too much like Moses and Eldeon.
Yay bible?

Uh...
Hmm...
I'll think o' sumthin dunt you wurry.
Fine this women was poor and found Eriko in a tree.
that work?
I has a good story.
just wait plz.
K?
I know the beginning is cliche, I'll fix it, but I has idea,
I'm not on my compy so i cannot write it ATM.
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PostSubject: Re: NF, Eriko, Daichi, and Deux   NF, Eriko, Daichi, and Deux - Page 2 Icon_minitimeFri Jan 30, 2009 10:39 am

Deus Ex Angelo wrote:
Snow Taradien wrote:
Deus Ex Angelo wrote:
Snow Taradien wrote:
Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
That's way to cliche. Sounds too much like Moses and Eldeon.
Yay bible?

Uh...
Hmm...
I'll think o' sumthin dunt you wurry.
Fine this women was poor and found Eriko in a tree.
that work?
I has a good story.
just wait plz.
K?
I know the beginning is cliche, I'll fix it, but I has idea,
I'm not on my compy so i cannot write it ATM.
I'll wait for it then.
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PostSubject: Re: NF, Eriko, Daichi, and Deux   NF, Eriko, Daichi, and Deux - Page 2 Icon_minitimeFri Jan 30, 2009 3:11 pm

Snow Taradien wrote:
Deus Ex Angelo wrote:
Snow Taradien wrote:
Deus Ex Angelo wrote:
Snow Taradien wrote:
Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
That's way to cliche. Sounds too much like Moses and Eldeon.
Yay bible?

Uh...
Hmm...
I'll think o' sumthin dunt you wurry.
Fine this women was poor and found Eriko in a tree.
that work?
I has a good story.
just wait plz.
K?
I know the beginning is cliche, I'll fix it, but I has idea,
I'm not on my compy so i cannot write it ATM.
I'll wait for it then.
Kthanks Snow.
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PostSubject: Re: NF, Eriko, Daichi, and Deux   NF, Eriko, Daichi, and Deux - Page 2 Icon_minitimeFri Jan 30, 2009 7:27 pm

*BUMP*
Here's my idea for Eriko, her backstory.

It began as any other day his name was Kaizer, he was mid-age man, who had lost his wife and daughter to a house fire.
Now he lived his life in sorrow, mourning their deaths.
He thought about this as he went hunting for his daily meat, carrying his bow and arrows across his back.
He walked into the forest, but as he hiked throught the woods, he heard a faint sound, the faint sound crying.
he ran to where he heard the sound.
the sound came louder, till he came across some bushes, he moved them aside to find a young babe wrapped in rags.

He gently picked up the child and held her in his arms.
the young baby girl stopped her crying and drifted to sleep in his arms.
me moved some of the rags aside to reveal that this girl had the ears and tails of a wolf

He thought for a moment.
"I'll name you Eriko, my sweet child." He said, he adopted her and know his mind was on something more joyous.

How's that?

Edit: Moar

Eriko grew up with some diffuculty, she had to wear bandages around her head to hide her ears, and had to hide her tail in the same around her waist.
The kids made fun of her for this.
But she was also the strongest of her school, so the kids were terrified of her too.
15 years later
One day,
a group of men came into town, wearing suits of metal similar to this.
NF, Eriko, Daichi, and Deux - Page 2 Fallout-3-1010
lead by a mid-aged man with grey wavy hair and an eye patch.
MOAR SOON.


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PostSubject: Re: NF, Eriko, Daichi, and Deux   NF, Eriko, Daichi, and Deux - Page 2 Icon_minitimeFri Jan 30, 2009 7:30 pm

That's much better. The only thing I have to say is check for spelling and grammar.

And check your PMs.
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PostSubject: Re: NF, Eriko, Daichi, and Deux   NF, Eriko, Daichi, and Deux - Page 2 Icon_minitimeFri Jan 30, 2009 7:46 pm

Deus Ex Angelo wrote:
*BUMP*
Here's my idea for Eriko, her backstory.

It began as any other day his name was Kaizer, he was mid-age man, who had lost his wife and daughter to a house fire.
Now he lived his life in sorrow, mourning their deaths.
He thought about this as he went hunting for his daily meat, carrying his bow and arrows across his back.
He walked into the forest, but as he hiked throught the woods, he heard a faint sound, the faint sound crying.
he ran to where he heard the sound.
the sound came louder, till he came across some bushes, he moved them aside to find a young babe wrapped in rags.

He gently picked up the child and held her in his arms.
the young baby girl stopped her crying and drifted to sleep in his arms.
me moved some of the rags aside to reveal that this girl had the ears and tails of a wolf.

He thought for a moment.
"I'll name you Eriko, my sweet child." He said, he adopted her and know his mind was on something more joyous.

How's that?

Edit: Moar

Eriko grew up with some diffuculty, she had to wear bandages around her head to hide her ears, and had to hide her tail in the same around her waist.
The kids made fun of her for this.
But she was also the strongest of her school, so the kids were terrified of her too.
15 years later
One day,
a group of men came into town, wearing suits of metal similar to this.
http://xspblog.files.wordpress.com/2008/08/fallout-3-1010.jpg
lead by a mid-aged man with grey wavy hair and an eye patch.
He heard rumours from the village people about a fox girl who had the power of lightning,
(yeah i forgot she was adept at lightning) they went to Kaizer's shack at the end of the village, and found him, and beat him down for info on Eriko
But he refused, luckily Eriko showed up, and began to fight against the armoured men, but the commander (whose name was Decius) told they would kill her adopted father if she didn't do as he said.
Her father begged her no to do it, but she did. They tied her hands around her back with electric coils to negate her electric powers, and gagged with a cloth and lead her back to their giant metal ship.
Their they bound her hands acorss her head and put her in a cell attching her to some sort of device that sapped her electric powers and fueled ship

MOAR SOON.
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PostSubject: Re: NF, Eriko, Daichi, and Deux   NF, Eriko, Daichi, and Deux - Page 2 Icon_minitimeFri Jan 30, 2009 10:22 pm

I like it. If she goes to jail, I have an idea on what should happen to her. That general that GSU made could be in that jail with her. GSU's Angelis chooses to go to the "dark side" and Eriko chooses the "right side."
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Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
I like it. If she goes to jail, I have an idea on what should happen to her. That general that GSU made could be in that jail with her. GSU's Angelis chooses to go to the "dark side" and Eriko chooses the "right side."
lokay then.
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