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PostSubject: Re: Revision about TLOK's storyline in general   Tue Apr 21, 2009 2:42 am

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Also this would be an interesting thing to the mix.

You see when the before the NeoDammerai went beneath the waves to keep the peace of there Utopia, they accidently some weapons behind.

Isuotek Xenosis, and Proutek Dzoir left behind some powerful technology on Alkas, their weapon testing sight.
It was to test their artificial soiliders,

Called "Cerios Qi Roilles"
NeoDammerian for "The Grey Knights."

They were living suits of armor powered mainly by their commander's thought waves.
They carried the abilities of a master swordsmen, and carried a large shiled and broad sword.
Their armor was made of Xenodonium, a (rare)flexible metal, does'nt rust, and 4 times tougher than steel.



They (with the help of others) created over 500 of these brillant war machines
but scrapped the idea, as war was not a philosophy the Neodammerai followed at the time.

They buried in a chamber, 75 feet underground never to be used again.


well thousands of years later,
they were dug up by Dr. Archedes Chimera, an alchemist (who will be the main antagonist in the 3rd story of the Night Rose)
and was transported to his manor, where he tinkered with machines.

200 years later, the burned remains of the manor were discovered and a secret underground chamber, full of all the Knights in top condition.

They were discovered none other then the Dictator of Akira and the leader of the Gear Mercenaries.
General Decius Machina.
Whose Information sources told him rumours of this.

He discovered them, and shipped them back to his homeland.
He would later sell them to King Nergal, King of Konas,
On which the Knights would take the name of; "The Blade Hunters"

How's that work?


No offense... but I found it all way too boring Sweat Drop ...
The idea of a robot army created by a bunch of guys who never used it sounds rather stupid.

...

They could have created a couple, to test battle mechanism (let's say 50, 75)... but an army of 500 dolls, with no use whatsoever.... Neutral


Besides, all this 'magic metal, unrustable, 4 times strong than steel' sounds way too crazy for me.

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PostSubject: Re: Revision about TLOK's storyline in general   Tue Apr 21, 2009 2:49 am

They were originally planning on using it,
But the NeoDammerai had made alot of weaponary that way beyond human comprehension.
even today.

like their Abyss cannon, it fire a concentrated a beam of Zengai at a particluar area and once it hit something, boom, explosion with a radius of 150 feet.

Also the NeoDammerai were a very advanced race,
they make us look as dumb as cows.

while humans at the time were living in cottages, they had home like us,
and their energy supply Zengai was non-polluntant, and they had almost no seperation of classes.
but everyone held their indidvuality, they created the first Utopia, basically.

(they did have to struggle to get to this, but it all came together.)


Now as for the Grey Knights,

How about this, instead of just leaving them there for no reason.

It was more of a precaution incase of an event where they had low soildiers and were in crisis, they they called them up.
But eventually they forgot and abandoned the project altogether.

how's that?
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PostSubject: Re: Revision about TLOK's storyline in general   Tue Apr 21, 2009 3:23 am

Good? I guess?

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PostSubject: Re: Revision about TLOK's storyline in general   Tue Apr 21, 2009 2:42 pm

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
Good? I guess?

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PostSubject: Re: Revision about TLOK's storyline in general   Tue Apr 21, 2009 10:30 pm

About the clumsy fire warrior, I’ve had an idea... listen to it:

    Most of the time, fire is uncontrolable and unpredictable. When you start a fire, it could destroy an awefully huge area, or die a few seconds after. If you have that in mind, then the fire guy should not have the ability to control himself... he should be very clumsy and unable to control his movement.

    I like the idea, specially if you think about the fire warrior abilites. He should not be able to handle a “one on one” battle... since he is not an skilled warrior. On the other hand, he should have an awesome amount of inner elemental energy, even bigger than all the others sword-handlers.

    His attacks should not be focused on one place, but take a bigger area. In other words, he would make a ten times bigger fire version of the “ice beam” with ease, but it would be virtually for him doing a fire version of an “blizzard ball”.
    Bad in “one on one” battles, but hell usefull to battle against huge armies and enemies.
    That’s something he should try to improve as long as the story progress... he won’t be able to improve a lot, since it’s on his nature being uncontrolable; but just enough to handle “solo” battles againts average sword-man.



About his story, I’ve an idea:

    On the fire village where Ken was borned, they always had been a fire-holder. Legend said that one day, a chain of events would make the torch of mystical fire to get started (*).
    Ken was an average boy, who started to train at the age of 10 in the fire temple, as most of boys and girls of that town did. In fact, he had never been skilled in all his life. Sword-fighting was not an exception. He was, by far, the worst student his school had. Clumsy, slow, relexes-less.... It was a mistery why, but Ken never gave up... even he was a loser.
    Eventually, the mistycal fire started, and the people from the fire temple went to a ritual in which the mystical fire would choose one warrior. One by one, they tried, and got their hands burned.... until only one, clumsy fighter was left... Ken.
    In that moment, most of people though that the fighter who handles the mystical fire was going to be an outsider... but...

    People couldn’t belive their eyes, when the fire who had burned all the other fire masters hand, turned into a sword inside that little, clumsy boy hands.

    Most of people were stunned, but the temple master easilly understood what was going on: The reason for Ken to be such a pathethic swordman was not weakness, but a huge power he couldn’t control

(*) We know that this chain of events is the apparition of the other sword-men.

What do you think?

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PostSubject: Re: Revision about TLOK's storyline in general   Wed Apr 22, 2009 3:12 am

Also about Korah becoming the Next King of Konas, I have an idea that might work.

Long, long before Nergal took the throne, or before Konas existed for that matter,
The capital of Konas, was home to the NeoDammerai and their capital city of Kharyahbor.

They ruled all of Central Kona, for the most part.

When they went beneath the waves, they promised one they would return to the surface when an Era peace was to ensued.
and well after Korah kills Nergal, the people are confused as to who should rule the land.

Well in this confusion.

Imperialix Norrenus comes to the capital with all his conselors and about 200 of his best soilidiers waving banners of peace.

There he pass his blessing of the land to Korah, as he was chosen to weild Omni Kattesai; the Soul Blade of Justice.

Korah feels a bit overwhelmed by the offer, but Norrenus also tells him that he will not rule the Earth alone.

He then establishes the Order of The 8 Gentle Judges.
of the former swordsmen.
To help Korah rule with him, like a world government.

also Deux becomes the Qeutek; the Prince of NeoDammerian's with his Father, Norrenus.

He then asks Eriko to marry him.
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PostSubject: Re: Revision about TLOK's storyline in general   Wed Apr 22, 2009 3:40 am

tl;dr




But seriously, the idea sounds decent. I'm still thinking of ways to change the final fight a bit, so don't expect that thing I said to be exactly like that.

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PostSubject: Re: Revision about TLOK's storyline in general   Wed Apr 22, 2009 4:07 am

*Sees no opinion about my story*


;_;

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PostSubject: Re: Revision about TLOK's storyline in general   Wed Apr 22, 2009 4:09 am

What you said was basically what Deux had already said.

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PostSubject: Re: Revision about TLOK's storyline in general   Wed Apr 22, 2009 4:12 am

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
What you said was basically what Deux had already said.


Yeah, but I made it deeper...

All deux said was that the dude was clumsy... I inveted a reason and all. pale Sweat Drop

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PostSubject: Re: Revision about TLOK's storyline in general   Wed Apr 22, 2009 2:32 pm

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:
tl;dr




But seriously, the idea sounds decent. I'm still thinking of ways to change the final fight a bit, so don't expect that thing I said to be exactly like that.


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PostSubject: Re: Revision about TLOK's storyline in general   Thu Oct 15, 2009 10:09 pm

Ummmm so I was sorta thinking if you wanted to make the series less generic at the end after Nergel(did i spell that wrong?) is dead there could be a war for power between all the kingdoms b/c why should Korah automatically become King(someone mentioned above why but that could be used later after the war for power is finished).
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PostSubject: Re: Revision about TLOK's storyline in general   Thu Oct 15, 2009 11:53 pm

Most countries don't want any power, but just want peace. So at Nergal's death, many countries be will be happy, except for Kona.

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