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Korah Hyoutetsu
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 |  Subject: Chapter Four *Update?*  Thu Mar 05, 2009 12:38 am | |
| Since I've decided to split episode three into two parts, the remaining stuff will go in Ch4. I'll get start on this as soon as Ch3 is done. I'm planing on this episode to go like this:Snow and Korah continue their journey into a dark forest.
Snow goes into the temple, Korah gets lost in the forest.
Snow speaks to himself about his past about Rachel.
Korah is confused and tries to find Snow.
Korah fights some Bandits as Snow fights some Dragons.
Korah kills all of the Bandits and finds the temple.
Snow kills most of the dragons, however is struggling with the last.
Korah and Snow team up to take down the dragon.
Knights arrive into the forest and locate Korah and Snow as they defeat the dragon.
The General Angelis will tell Snow that he is not the last of the Angelis and that there are many left.
Korah and Snow take down the knights, but the General flees.
They leave the forest exhausted, and right away they find a hotel to stay at.Sound good? Sprites I'll need are: Forest Background/tiles Temple Background/tiles Bandits (Aiden, I'd like your bandits) Dragons Knights General Angelis Hotel/City background The faster I get these the better. _________________ 
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Snow Taradien
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Element:: Ice
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Thu Mar 05, 2009 1:00 am | |
| Sounds alright to me... As for the General Angelis, will you use Mckracken, or will someone else create one.
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Flowers
The petals fall as snowflakes
Cast upon the waters surface
As shadows on the wind
We look and see the truth
Hidden behind a veil of lies
A perfect cherry blossom
Lost and forgotten, to the shifting sands of time
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Korah Hyoutetsu
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Thu Mar 05, 2009 1:04 am | |
| Yeah, I'm using him, but I haven't gotten any updates in awhile. _________________ |
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Snow Taradien
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Thu Mar 05, 2009 1:05 am | |
| Ah. Who made him again?
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Flowers
The petals fall as snowflakes
Cast upon the waters surface
As shadows on the wind
We look and see the truth
Hidden behind a veil of lies
A perfect cherry blossom
Lost and forgotten, to the shifting sands of time
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Korah Hyoutetsu
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Snow Taradien
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Thu Mar 05, 2009 1:14 am | |
| Ah, that's right. He also did the knights too if I remember correct.
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Flowers
The petals fall as snowflakes
Cast upon the waters surface
As shadows on the wind
We look and see the truth
Hidden behind a veil of lies
A perfect cherry blossom
Lost and forgotten, to the shifting sands of time
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Aiden
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Thu Mar 05, 2009 1:35 am | |
| Okay, guess i'll have to do some more work with the bandits. BTW, how's chapter 3 part 1 coming along? |
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Deuxelim
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Thu Mar 05, 2009 2:54 am | |
| So this isn't going to be in Ch.3? \thats rather odd. |
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Korah Hyoutetsu
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Deuxelim
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Mar 06, 2009 12:21 am | |
| | Korah Hyoutetsu wrote: | | Deuxelim wrote: | So this isn't going to be in Ch.3?
\thats rather odd. |
It gives more time for the forest scene and training scenes. I don't want each Ch to be too long. |
Well there only a minute long each. |
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NeverAllowCrime
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Mar 06, 2009 7:57 pm | |
| Mmm.... sounds pretty similar to the chapter's three original outline... oh wai.... |
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Snow Taradien
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Sat Mar 07, 2009 1:29 pm | |
| It basically is the original chapter 3 outline, but we added a chapter.
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Flowers
The petals fall as snowflakes
Cast upon the waters surface
As shadows on the wind
We look and see the truth
Hidden behind a veil of lies
A perfect cherry blossom
Lost and forgotten, to the shifting sands of time
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Kirbyfan42
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Mon Apr 27, 2009 1:15 am | |
| Is this gonna be a regular thing with Snow talking to himself. But other than that, it sounds good. _________________ Current Projects:Learning to sprite JUS - I fail. SK - 2%  Kirby TSR - 2%  | Luna wrote: | | Snow Taradien wrote: | | Luna wrote: | | I am sexy enough to rape Snow and get away with it. Does that count? |
Hrm... That are pretty powerful...
I'll have to think about it. |
*jedi mind trick* |
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Deuxelim
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| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Mon Apr 27, 2009 5:09 pm | |
| Speaking of Four.. Nf where's your progress? |
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Korah Hyoutetsu
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