Chapter Four Update?

**Korah Hyoutetsu** · Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Jul 03, 2009 9:07 pm

Snow Taradien wrote:

I liked it so far, my only problem being there the Teardrop doesn't fit in as well with the sprite as it does the Mugshot.

Other than that. I'm happy.

Yea, I kind of thought so too.

Aiden wrote:

I think the scene where he kills all the guards could look a little better.
It actually looks kinda funny, when they lie in a big cluster like that in a pool of mspaint blood.

...and sweet, you used my slash. Smile

Looks better than I thought it would.

Can you be more specific?

Deuxelim wrote:

I think we could emphaisize the scene of Snow's past a little bit better, maybe a bit more close-ups, and really emphaisize when the guards Kill rachel like its life changing or something.
and make Snow kill the guards as if he was actually fighting.

I can do that. Actually, that gives me tons of ideas. I'll get right to it.

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**Snow Taradien** · Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Jul 03, 2009 9:37 pm

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Snow Taradien wrote:

I liked it so far, my only problem being there the Teardrop doesn't fit in as well with the sprite as it does the Mugshot.

Other than that. I'm happy.

Yea, I kind of thought so too.

Aiden wrote:

I think the scene where he kills all the guards could look a little better.
It actually looks kinda funny, when they lie in a big cluster like that in a pool of mspaint blood.

...and sweet, you used my slash. Smile

Looks better than I thought it would.

Can you be more specific?

Deuxelim wrote:

I think we could emphaisize the scene of Snow's past a little bit better, maybe a bit more close-ups, and really emphaisize when the guards Kill rachel like its life changing or something.
and make Snow kill the guards as if he was actually fighting.

I can do that. Actually, that gives me tons of ideas. I'll get right to it.

I believe what aiden is refering to is that the death of the knights is a bit meh.

Probably implying the same thing that Deux actually said, that the guards should actually FIGHT snow.

However, it's really up to you, since a fight of that scale could take a LOT of work.

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Flowers
The petals fall as snowflakes

Cast upon the waters surface
As shadows on the wind

We look and see the truth
Hidden behind a veil of lies

A perfect cherry blossom
Lost and forgotten, to the shifting sands of time

**Korah Hyoutetsu** · Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Jul 03, 2009 9:42 pm

Well, I have an idea to show that the knights fought snow, without actually showing it. You'll see what I mean, and I'm pretty sure you will all like it.

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**Snow Taradien** · Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Jul 03, 2009 9:50 pm

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Well, I have an idea to show that the knights fought snow, without actually showing it. You'll see what I mean, and I'm pretty sure you will all like it.

I'm slightly confused, but it sounds cool nevertheless.

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Flowers
The petals fall as snowflakes

Cast upon the waters surface
As shadows on the wind

We look and see the truth
Hidden behind a veil of lies

A perfect cherry blossom
Lost and forgotten, to the shifting sands of time

**Korah Hyoutetsu** · Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Jul 03, 2009 9:59 pm

Trust me. It's more dramatic, more BA, and less work! Very Happy

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**Deuxelim** · Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Jul 03, 2009 11:07 pm

*waits*

**Korah Hyoutetsu** · Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Jul 03, 2009 11:23 pm

Fixed! Also, the scene selection works now, but I haven't updated the pictures yet. So, to see all the updates, select scene II.

http://sirtopeia.com/users/blizzardblade/chapters/Ep%204.swf

*EDIT*

Also, when you click on the link, refresh the page so it can record the update.

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**Eriko Hemming** · Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Jul 03, 2009 11:26 pm

Korah Hyoutetsu wrote:

Fixed! Also, the scene selection works now, but I haven't updated the pictures yet. So, to see all the updates, select scene II.

http://sirtopeia.com/users/blizzardblade/chapters/Ep%204.swf

I get an Error message

**Korah Hyoutetsu** · Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Jul 03, 2009 11:26 pm

Lol, sorry. It should work now, though. And make sure you refresh!

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**Luna** · Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Jul 03, 2009 11:51 pm

Wow. Snow is very badass indeed. Not that we needed to see that to know though :p

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**Deuxelim** · Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Jul 03, 2009 11:53 pm

Much better, but you may want to check your grammar.

and maybe everybody in the village dies instead.

**Aiden** · Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Sat Jul 04, 2009 12:27 am

Yes, now there's actual action.

It just looked funny before; I laughed a little.
Now it's good.

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Vader - The Nomad.
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**Snow Taradien** · Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Sat Jul 04, 2009 1:08 am

Deuxelim wrote:

Much better, but you may want to check your grammar.

and maybe everybody in the village dies instead.

Most of the others in the village actually should end up dying.

Originally Snow stays in the village for a short while, helping the wounded and burying the dead.

He later leaves for revenge.

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Flowers
The petals fall as snowflakes

Cast upon the waters surface
As shadows on the wind

We look and see the truth
Hidden behind a veil of lies

A perfect cherry blossom
Lost and forgotten, to the shifting sands of time

**Korah Hyoutetsu** · Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Sun Jul 05, 2009 7:54 pm

Okay, for some reason, my computer is broken again...

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**Luna** · Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Sat Jul 18, 2009 12:45 am

WELL. FIX IT. D:<

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