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Snow Taradien
Writer
 Number of posts: 1100
Age: 23
Location: On the Scarred wasteland that is Terrago.
Post Points: 1293
Registration date: 2008-11-27
Character Profile
Race:: Angelis
Element:: Ice
Member Points: Sexy
 |  Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?*  Mon Nov 02, 2009 1:28 am | |
| Pretty awesome.
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Flowers
The petals fall as snowflakes
Cast upon the waters surface
As shadows on the wind
We look and see the truth
Hidden behind a veil of lies
A perfect cherry blossom
Lost and forgotten, to the shifting sands of time
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Mitsuki
Artist
 Number of posts: 107
Age: 17
Location: Canada...
Post Points: 411
Registration date: 2009-04-11
Character Profile
Race:: Angelis
Element:: Dark
Member Points: 2
| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Mon Nov 02, 2009 5:06 am | |
| Awesomeness! X3 _________________  |
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Luna
Regular
Number of posts: 902
Age: 15
Location: Somewhere between Heaven and Hell...
Post Points: 946
Registration date: 2008-11-27
Character Profile
Race:: Angel
Element:: Dark
Member Points: 1
| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Mon Nov 02, 2009 7:01 pm | |
| Sweet. But Snow's fight does seem a little too short, or at least, not as flashy. Other than that, I love it. _________________  |
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Korah Hyoutetsu
Admin
Number of posts: 2453
Age: 17
Location: Orlando
Post Points: 2347
Registration date: 2008-11-26
Character Profile
Race:: Human
Element:: Ice
Member Points: 0
| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Wed Nov 04, 2009 4:52 am | |
| I've worked on it some more today. I'll be posting my final update Thursday and uploading it to Newgrounds on Friday. Let's hope for the best. _________________  |
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Luna
Regular
Number of posts: 902
Age: 15
Location: Somewhere between Heaven and Hell...
Post Points: 946
Registration date: 2008-11-27
Character Profile
Race:: Angel
Element:: Dark
Member Points: 1
| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Wed Nov 04, 2009 4:56 pm | |
| *hopes for the best* _________________ |
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Snow Taradien
Writer
Number of posts: 1100
Age: 23
Location: On the Scarred wasteland that is Terrago.
Post Points: 1293
Registration date: 2008-11-27
Character Profile
Race:: Angelis
Element:: Ice
Member Points: Sexy
| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Thu Nov 05, 2009 12:37 am | |
| Awesome, can't wait to see the final result.
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Flowers
The petals fall as snowflakes
Cast upon the waters surface
As shadows on the wind
We look and see the truth
Hidden behind a veil of lies
A perfect cherry blossom
Lost and forgotten, to the shifting sands of time
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Korah Hyoutetsu
Admin
Number of posts: 2453
Age: 17
Location: Orlando
Post Points: 2347
Registration date: 2008-11-26
Character Profile
Race:: Human
Element:: Ice
Member Points: 0
| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Nov 06, 2009 2:28 am | |
| This is pretty much the last update for Chapter Four till tomorrow's release, so give me any last second critique before it's too late! Be online tomorrow so you can help vote on it! http://sirtopeia.com/users/blizzardblade/chapters/Ep%204.swf_________________ |
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Korah Hyoutetsu
Admin
Number of posts: 2453
Age: 17
Location: Orlando
Post Points: 2347
Registration date: 2008-11-26
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Race:: Human
Element:: Ice
Member Points: 0
| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Nov 06, 2009 2:36 am | |
| lolfail i forgot i gotta do the credits _________________ |
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Snow Taradien
Writer
Number of posts: 1100
Age: 23
Location: On the Scarred wasteland that is Terrago.
Post Points: 1293
Registration date: 2008-11-27
Character Profile
Race:: Angelis
Element:: Ice
Member Points: Sexy
| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Nov 06, 2009 2:38 am | |
| Awesome. Just two things. One, the sigh. Not that big of a problem, but still kinda awkward. Next, no credits. I just realized that. Either that or it takes an awful long time for them to start. Other than that, everything is fine.
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Flowers
The petals fall as snowflakes
Cast upon the waters surface
As shadows on the wind
We look and see the truth
Hidden behind a veil of lies
A perfect cherry blossom
Lost and forgotten, to the shifting sands of time
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Korah Hyoutetsu
Admin
Number of posts: 2453
Age: 17
Location: Orlando
Post Points: 2347
Registration date: 2008-11-26
Character Profile
Race:: Human
Element:: Ice
Member Points: 0
| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Nov 06, 2009 3:00 am | |
| You missed my post on that fail. _________________ |
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Aiden
Veteran
Number of posts: 1069
Age: 29
Location: In the lonely confines of Blizzard Blade forums.
Post Points: 1198
Registration date: 2008-11-27
Character Profile
Race:: Fox [Anthro]
Element:: Light
Member Points: 4
| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Nov 06, 2009 3:59 am | |
| You should really, really fix the parts with the missing backgrounds in some places. Like when the ground just ends. You should extend it a little. Also, when Snow does his Blizzard Beam, it cuts off at the beginning. Even when the Bandits were on-screen, you could see where it ended. You should expand the ground tiles and the Blizzard Beam effects out of the frame. Then again, I guess the users on NG won't get the added perk of fullscreen viewing. |
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Luna
Regular
Number of posts: 902
Age: 15
Location: Somewhere between Heaven and Hell...
Post Points: 946
Registration date: 2008-11-27
Character Profile
Race:: Angel
Element:: Dark
Member Points: 1
| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Nov 06, 2009 4:03 am | |
| Awesome. Damn man, this is getting better with each episode. Of course, they're all good. But I'm almost sure it'll be frontpage'd. In fact, if the other one was, this one HAS to be. _________________ |
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Korah Hyoutetsu
Admin
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Age: 17
Location: Orlando
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Element:: Ice
Member Points: 0
| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Nov 06, 2009 4:06 am | |
| | Aiden wrote: | You should really, really fix the parts with the missing backgrounds in some places.
Like when the ground just ends. You should extend it a little.
Also, when Snow does his Blizzard Beam, it cuts off at the beginning.
Even when the Bandits were on-screen, you could see where it ended. You should expand the ground tiles and the Blizzard Beam effects out of the frame.
Then again, I guess the users on NG won't get the added perk of fullscreen viewing. |
Yea, nothing is really missing when the flash is at 550x400.| Luna wrote: | | Awesome. Damn man, this is getting better with each episode. Of course, they're all good. But I'm almost sure it'll be frontpage'd. In fact, if the other one was, this one HAS to be. |
I kinda doubt it just cause the last one began with a fight scene._________________ |
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Luna
Regular
Number of posts: 902
Age: 15
Location: Somewhere between Heaven and Hell...
Post Points: 946
Registration date: 2008-11-27
Character Profile
Race:: Angel
Element:: Dark
Member Points: 1
| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Nov 06, 2009 4:10 am | |
| | Korah Hyoutetsu wrote: | | Luna wrote: | | Awesome. Damn man, this is getting better with each episode. Of course, they're all good. But I'm almost sure it'll be frontpage'd. In fact, if the other one was, this one HAS to be. |
I kinda doubt it just cause the last one began with a fight scene. |
Well, not all frontpaged stuff starts out with BOOM SHAKA LAKA. If they give it a chance, I'm certain they'll like it.
Also, I spotted a little something. Right before Snow remembers what happened to Rachel, his drawing moves back a little. Not all that important, but I doubt it was on purpose._________________ |
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Korah Hyoutetsu
Admin
Number of posts: 2453
Age: 17
Location: Orlando
Post Points: 2347
Registration date: 2008-11-26
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Race:: Human
Element:: Ice
Member Points: 0
| | Subject: Re: Chapter Four *Update?* Fri Nov 06, 2009 4:13 am | |
| | Luna wrote: | | Korah Hyoutetsu wrote: | | Luna wrote: | | Awesome. Damn man, this is getting better with each episode. Of course, they're all good. But I'm almost sure it'll be frontpage'd. In fact, if the other one was, this one HAS to be. |
I kinda doubt it just cause the last one began with a fight scene. |
Well, not all frontpaged stuff starts out with BOOM SHAKA LAKA. If they give it a chance, I'm certain they'll like it.
Also, I spotted a little something. Right before Snow remembers what happened to Rachel, his drawing moves back a little. Not all that important, but I doubt it was on purpose. |
Most newgrounders will lose their attention with this flash in 2 minutes, and the action stuff don't happen till many minutes in.
Oh yeah, that's a tough thing to fix just because the way I made it._________________ |
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